I have just put up the first chapters of my two long WIP (see links below). I have been working on them both for the past year and am floundering with them at the moment. Unfortunately since the withdrawal of Garish Light to focus on RL, I have lost my sounding board for my longer stories. So, I’m currently looking for someone to critique the plot and character development, to point out holes and suggest ideas, to tell me if I am rambling or rushing the story, and to bounce ideas, reasons, and character motives off of. The correction of grammar and spelling is also helpful.
I don’t know how long it will take for either of the stories to be completed or how sporadic my working on them will be. I thought I would start with seeing if anyone of my friends here thinks they may be up to the challenge for either of these stories before I look farther a field.
If interested, leave a comment letting me know and indicate which story you would like to help with. Thanks!
The first story “No Use Crying Over Split Milk
” is the sequel to “Another Fine Mess”
Rating: G or PG since the first one was.
Summary: Harry and Severus adjust to their unique situation while avoiding the Minister for Magic’s clutches, searching for information on what Albus did to them, and helping to get Hogwarts restarted.
The second is sort of a vampire story, but with my own unique twist on it.Do Not Go Gentle into That Good Night
Summary: Some twenty years after the death of the Dark Lord, the remaining few of his followers exact revenge on Severus Snape for his betrayal. Cursed, beaten, and left in the woods, Severus waits for his end only to be inducted into a world hidden from even the wizarding world’s eyes by one he thought to never see again.
Rating: Probably R, maybe NR-17
Pairings: Severus/other male, eventually Snarry but will be a long drawn out before getting there.